I’ve been thinking about those final captions.
How about ‘diaspora* is a thriving community’ instead of ‘diaspora* is not dead’? ‘Thriving’ contains the sense of ‘alive and growing’ - so it would be a good word to use, as long as it’s going to be well enough understood be people who don’t speak English as their first language.
So, perhaps, for those two captions:
- diaspora* is a thriving community
- it’s here for you - come and join us!
It would also be good to add the foundation address for people who are interested. I’d suggest adding diasporafoundation.org as a separate caption after ‘it’s here for you - come and join us!’.
How do those suggestions seem to you all?